Screenwriting

The Writers Store has a special treat for anyone interested in screenwriting and you don’t have to be in Los Angeleswhere they are located in order to participate.  Registration is now open for The Screenwriter’s Craft, A Four-Part Webinar Series with celebrated producer, lecturer, teacher and author Syd Field.  The course will feature a deep exploration of screenwriting and illustrations from Academy Award-winning films geared to expanding, enlarging and broadening the knowledge, comprehension and technique of the screenplay and the art and craft of screenwriting.  Conducted from 10:00AM – 12:00PM PDT, these online sessions also include a 3- minute live Q&A with Syd as well. 

Day One: Structure Deconstructed kicks off on Saturday, March 31st and examines the importance of dramatic structure from the inception of the idea through the completion of the screenplay.  This session explores the dimension of structure as the essential building block in screenwriting and features clips from Academy Award-winning films.

Day Two: Making Your Scenes Reveal will take place on Sunday, April 1st.  The scene is the cell of dramatic action and has a simple function: to either move the story forward or reveal information about the character.  This session focuses on the many different ways scenes are written to effectively drive the story forward and reveal emotional insights.  During part of the program a scene from “The King’s Speech” will be analyzed in depth and detail which will explore different aspects and approaches to writing great movie scenes.

Day Three: Writing Effective Dialogue is next on Saturday, April 14th.  This session delves into the purpose of dialogue and its function and illustrates the nine different types found in films like “Juno,” “Mr. & Mrs. Smith,” “Little Miss Sunshine,” “The Bucket List” and “American Beauty”.  It is designed to expand and broaden your awareness of dialogue and its function.

Day Four: The Six Stages of Rewriting finishes up the webinar series on Sunday, April 15th.  This session examines what happens after the first draft is finished and helps the writer determine what comes next to make the story work.  Some of the questions raised involve the strength of the characters and whether or not more action is needed and what you can do to make the first draft a better read.  Attendees will learn to approach the re-write through the Six Stages of Rewriting and begins by looking at your initial intention and whether or not you wound up writing the story you originally intended to.  This course is all about the Re-Write and the tools that can be utilized to make the intention equal the result.

Space is limited and each course is $79.00 separately or $245.00 for a special package deal.   Visit http://www.writersstore.com/the-screenwriters-craft-webinar-syd-field?et_mid=545053&rid=232799158  to reserve your virtual seat.

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On December 3, 2011 the Nevada Film Alliance hosted Oscar-winning producer Edward Saxon’s (Silence of the Lambs) first ever all day seminar here in Las Vegas.  A few weeks ago I shared some of what was discussed and now here is Part 2.  One topic that Ed spent a great deal of time talking about was the circle of people often found surrounding talent.  For example, an actor could easily have an agent, manager, lawyer and publicist handling a variety of the duties and Ed spoke about some of the responsibilities each one has and how much they are usually paid.  An agent normally makes 10% of the actor’s take and Saxon explained that the bigger the agency the more clients they are going to have.  The largest ones right now are CAA, William Morris Endeavor or WME, ICM and United Talent Agency.  Agencies like these have departments for film, TV, music and corporate sports and as a rule agents field offers and package deals while serving as a great resource for obtaining information and achieving access to other talent.  Next, Ed spoke about the managers noting that one major difference between the two is that a manager can’t negotiate a deal.  Also, under California law, agents can’t be producers, however, managers can.  They also give more attention to the client and are more apt to find and develop new materials and be more concerned with helping the people they represent realize their dreams.  Managers receive 10% or more for their services.  Then there is the publicist who handles the public persona of the clients and escorts them to press conferences, red carpets and other events.  The publicist is often the person seen traveling with talent and acting as a go between with the media.  Publicists earn an average of 3-4k a month.  Finally, there are the attorneys who negotiate the deals, make introductions and handle all contracts.  Lawyers should have entertainment industry experience so that they know what is considered boiler plate in a contract and what items need to be negotiated or argued about. It is best to have someone representing you who is both a litigation specialist and a troubleshooter.  They earn about 5% of the talent’s income for these skills.  As a result approximately 30-35% of the actor’s pay goes to the team.  

After covering this area we moved on to discussing different types of script deals.  Ed talked about 1st look development spec scripts where nothing is paid in advance yet the story can be locked up for six months with sweat equity, then there are various other types of option deals.  A screenplay can be optioned many ways including using an agreement where very little money is paid now against money in the future.  You need to think about what you want to get out of the deal before making it.  For example, author Steven King has sold options for as little as a $1.00, providing he keeps control of his work.  You should also consider the reputation and track record of the producers involved and whether or not you feel they will do justice to the story and actually be able to produce it.  Also, if you don’t have enough time during the period originally allotted, a second option can be negotiated extending the rights for up to another 18 months. Saxon explained that there are many ways to set up these agreements and anybody who is interesting in producing can contact a writer and negotiate terms for their work.

There were a few other details he suggested we make note of.  First of all, be aware of revision clauses whereby the story is purchased for a number of years, then the rights return to the writer.  Also, when a guild writer is hired there is a minimum scale set with a percentage of the payment owed being due on the 1st day of shooting principle photography. He also mentioned some of the different areas scripts come from such as newspaper or magazine articles, video games, non-fiction novels, news items, original screenplays, fictional novels and graphic novels.  Pay attention to the types of stories that are being bought and produced.  For instance across all studios the ratio of comedy to dramas is around 1/3. 

Unions and guilds were created by the studios and they set the terms.  Signatory companies employ members under rules of the guild which provides a certain amount of protection.  For example, two guild writers can’t be hired to do the same script without waivers being signed.  If there’s a dispute over credit, there’s an arbitration procedure, then there are also healthcare benefits and residuals that the guild offers.  Productions are budgeted for a 12 hour a day turnaround time for talent and 10 hours for crew, which is necessary to note with regards to budgeting. 

Saxon also spoke about different job functions on the set and how assistant directors make up schedules and handle extras.  He said that one of the rules for having continuous employment is establishing continuity and being able to balance artistic and economical needs of the shoot.  He added that casting directors are crucial as sounding boards in the early stages of putting a film together because they recognize who is good, while during production the script supervisor is key because of the notes taken on the set.  Another hint is to be aware of your transportation needs since the trucks have to reach your locations first.  He suggested casting locals and getting to know who is in the community where you are and that if you are a producer stay out of things.  Know what you’re supposed to do and don’t mess with anything else.  

Perhaps the most fun part of the day was hearing some of Saxon’s stories about the films he’s made.  For example, he referred to “Silence of the Lambs” as a version of Little Red Riding Hood.  Ed claims that they had no idea the film would be so successful adding that when you are making a movie you don’t know how it will work out.  Originally Gene Hackman and Michelle Pfeiffer were considered for the leads, but both thought the script was too grisly so the studio began looking at Sean Connery and Jack Nicholson, who also turned it down.  At the time Anthony Hopkins was doing stage work in London and wasn’t originally a strong contender since the studio preferred having a movie star in the lead.  

Calling “Philadelphia” as a political piece Saxon said it was not made for people who had gay friends with aids, but rather for people who weren’t there yet.  The film made twice the amount of money overseas as it did in the states.  The Denzel Washington character wasn’t in the 1st draft of the script and originally the lawyer was written as an Italian, yet Ed believes that Denzel’s part was crucial for Tom Hank’s Oscar win.  Saxon also admitted that he almost cut the Opera scene because he thought it was stereographical, but was glad he didn’t because Hanks turned out so great in it.  He recommended that when in doubt you go for it after admitting that producers tend to play it safer while directors are the ones who like to push.  “Trust yourself,” he advised.  Currently, Ed is enjoying television success as Executive Producer of the new HBO series “Enlightened” starring Laura Dern, which has presented him with different types of challenges since with television everything is constantly in pre-production, production and post-production.  Perhaps the truest words of wisdom he shared during the seminar were actually first spoken by Harry Belafonte who said, “Be careful how you treat people when you’re on the way up cause you’ll meet them when you’re on the way up again.”

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Why Filmmakers and Screenwriters Should Get to Know The Black List

December 14, 2011

One Hollywood tradition that screenwriters and filmmakers seem to observe in December is checking out to see who made The Black List and this year was no exception when it was announced earlier this week.  For those who are unfamiliar with it, the list was started seven years ago in 2004 by former Universal Pictures executive [...]

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Screenwriter Stephen G. Levy Talks About Being a Scribe

July 19, 2011

I spent the weekend attending the Las Vegas Film Festival at the Hilton Hotel and had an amazing time speaking with the winner of the Indie Icon Award actor Michael Madsen and the moderator of the special event actor/director Ash Adams, who won the 2010 Best Film Award for “Once Fallen” at last year’s festival. I’ll be posting [...]

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Screenwriter/Producer Nathan Cole: Why We Filmed in Nevada

April 4, 2011

 Even before reading this guest blog post from Nathan Cole, writer and producer of The Waterhole, or @WaterholeMovie as he’s called on Twitter, I’ve known about his fondness for Nevada.  That was apparent from a conversation we had several months ago when he was in Las Vegas and we had the chance to meet.  Find [...]

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Come Share Director/Writer/Actor John W. Bosley’s Awakening – Part 3

March 5, 2011

Hope while you’ve been reading Parts 1 & 2 of this Filmmakers Notebook Q&A you’ve had the chance to check out the new micro-pilot film “Awakening” from independent filmmaker John W. Bosley, who is otherwise known as @JBMovies.  The final segment, Part 3 is posted below. Do you think the demand for micro-pilots is going to increase and lead to [...]

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Come Share Director/Writer/Actor John W. Bosley’s Awakening – Part 2

March 3, 2011

Hope you had the chance to check out the new micro-pilot film “Awakening” from independent filmmaker John W. Bosley, who is otherwise known as @JBMovies, and read Part 1 of the Filmmakers Notebook Q&A with him.  If so you are definitely ready for Part 2, which is posted below.  Is there a difference in your [...]

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Come Share Director/Writer/Actor John W. Bosley’s Awakening – Part 1

February 28, 2011

Today is a great day for independent filmmaker John W. Bosley, otherwise known as @JBMovies on Twitter, and Filmmakers Notebook is happy to be a part of it.  Below you can watch John’s micro-pilot film ”Awakening”, if you haven’t seen it already.  It’s captivating and definitely leaves the viewer wanting  more, so from that perspective I’d say mission accomplished.  Great work from [...]

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King is a Fink Tilts the World of Indie Filmmaking – Part 2

February 14, 2011

Part 2 of the Filmmakers Notebook Q&A with the dynamic writing powerhouse Julie Keck and Jessica King, who are also known as @kingisafink.  Find out more about TILT and what they’re going to be working on next. You’re in post production with TILT now; looking back, is there anything you would have done differently? Overall, [...]

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King is a Fink Tilts the World of Indie Filmmaking – Part 1

February 11, 2011

Filmmakers Notebook is delighted to bring you Part 1 of a Q&A with the dynamic writing powerhouse made up of Julie Keck and Jessica King, who are affectionately known as @kingisafink in some circles including Twitter.  They’ve branched out from making shorts to teaming up with Phil Holbrook aka @philontilt, to make the feature TILT, which is set to debut this spring.  [...]

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